I am not going to sugar coat it; your storytelling ability is horrendous. Anal sex Anyway, I really liked your story. You’re a fucked up person! However, the beginning was strong but then on the end with the sex, you totally let us down. It feels like you are skipping around a lot; whether or not you are is a mystery. I am not going to tell you how you should write, but please check your work before posting. Id like to read more of this story though.anonymous readerReport 2011-07-05 17:52:53Your poor thing,it wasent fair for you at all to have to grow up with that discussting disfunctionality i hope you personnaly find peace in your life as you know it my love is praying for you.«1» keep trying! It feels like you are skipping around a lot; whether or not you are is a mystery. I am not going to tell you how you should write, but please check your work before posting. You’re a fucked up person! Secondly, why would someone who prays be on this site?
