PLEASE learn how to proofread you stuff BEFORE dumping onto this site. Anal sex If you are going to write, learn about what constitutes good writing. This is full of misspelled words and incorrect grammar. If is NOT just a bunch of printed words. You still have a few mistakes, but it’s still good.«1» PLEASE learn how to proofread you stuff BEFORE dumping onto this site. If is NOT just a bunch of printed words. PLEASE learn how to proofread you stuff BEFORE dumping onto this site. If you cannot proofread, find someone (who is literate) to do it for you. This one is so poorly written that I stopped after a few paragraphs. You even misspelled “collage(sic)” and “sus(sic)” among many others.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-14 20:38:39Much better than the one before. You even misspelled “collage(sic)” and “sus(sic)” among many others.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-14 20:38:39Much better than the one before. 2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-09-15 01:31:23If this has been edited I am certainly happy that I did not try to read the previous version. This one is so poorly written that I stopped after a few paragraphs.
