Try being consistent with the type narratoring you use in a story. Anal porn I would like the first anomonous reader to read the tags and fuck offanonymous readerReport 2013-08-20 06:55:02Story was good. P.S great stories keep it upLordofgoatsReport 2013-08-20 08:05:04I would like to thank the second anomonous reader for the constructive advice. But you keep going from first person to third person narrator when telling the story and it gets confusing. Other then that , not a bad story.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-20 05:51:57What a loaf of horse crap…here this man has a women give herself total over to him as a sex slave and you go about pissing on her and making her vomit all the time. But you keep going from first person to third person narrator when telling the story and it gets confusing. Fuck her brain out at home, work her like a real slave at work and get lunch time blowjobs under the desk.«1» I would like the first anomonous reader to read the tags and fuck offanonymous readerReport 2013-08-20 06:55:02Story was good.
