This story has definite potential. 7 comments«12»READERReport 2005-11-11 05:38:23agrree with miker . ass porn . … This story has definite potential. Your suggestions are lame. He is married to a woman old enough to have an 18 yo daughter, but he slacks around the house like a 20 yo stoner. He is married to a woman old enough to have an 18 yo daughter, but he slacks around the house like a 20 yo stoner. Your suggestions are lame. 7 comments«12»READERReport 2005-11-11 05:38:23agrree with miker . . … (most writers at this site treat description like a drivers license with bra/penis size. For all the build up, the sex scene(s?) was kind of anticlimactic. but dude do write the next the story ha a lot of potential . . … 7 comments«12»READERReport 2005-11-11 05:38:23agrree with miker . . … (most writers at this site treat description like a drivers license with bra/penis size. He is married to a woman old enough to have an 18 yo daughter, but he slacks around the house like a 20 yo stoner. Come on guys, give us some freckles, glasses, and tattoos.) The dialogue was erratic, but dialogue is hard. The story does have potential
