I’m not going to tell you to stop writing like some people will. the story it self was ok but it was a little rough and it didn’t really have a flow at all.«12» Well not here anyway. Anal sex Also sex scenes need to be expanded and have more detail, describe it more, say what there bodies look like, how the’re feeling that sort of thing, The thing with her friend was kind of strange. Well not here anyway. So like i said really work on your writing and proof read it be for posting. If you’re going to write a scene like that give a reason why here friend and again describe it more, The location was also odd for it to happen, someone would have found or heard them. Well not here anyway. So like i said really work on your writing and proof read it be for posting. I’m not going to tell you to stop writing like some people will. So like i said really work on your writing and proof read it be for posting.
