8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-07-06 21:58:07needs a total rewrite by a GOOD WRITER using a GOOD EDITOR not a hack like you. luckly the question marks just replaced the qoatation marks,but its kind of hard to tell if there asking a question or not. Anal porn luckly the question marks just replaced the qoatation marks,but its kind of hard to tell if there asking a question or not. but i like the story and wouldnt mind seeing where sean and rose go from here«12» luckly the question marks just replaced the qoatation marks,but its kind of hard to tell if there asking a question or not. luckly the question marks just replaced the qoatation marks,but its kind of hard to tell if there asking a question or not. never post a copy of a story without deleteing the original first.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-04 03:17:47I could barely read this. It needs significant grammar and spelling revisions.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-01 23:22:52the question marks are a little annoyin but stuff like this happens to a lot of peoples stories on here when there published.
