Who are the characters? where did they know Sarah from? Anal sex Keep those in mind when writing a story too. Let me if I may, give some constructive critisism? and lastly, and I got this on my own story as a comment, read your own story out loud to catch some of the mistakes. Keep those in mind when writing a story too. secondly, you could describe the sexual energy-tention-feelings like “I can feel my balls churning and my sister’s hot and wet mouth sucking even harder, I think she is trying to drink the cum from my balls” or “she’s so fucking wet and she tastes amazing. Where do they live? and lastly, and I got this on my own story as a comment, read your own story out loud to catch some of the mistakes. secondly, you could describe the sexual energy-tention-feelings like “I can feel my balls churning and my sister’s hot and wet mouth sucking even harder, I think she is trying to drink the cum from my balls” or “she’s so fucking wet and she tastes amazing.
